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TokyoRain 10-29-2008 10:11 PM

Black Violin
 
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Okay, I'm doing this off the top of my head...tell me what you think K? :ywave: I attached the icon that kinda led (with the help from this one guy...lol) to me writing this poem.

Black Violin
Dance,
Oh slaves to love and romance.
Dance to the tune of this black violin.
Let it sweep you away,
In waves of shadow ebony.

Waltz,
Oh prisoners of the heart's desires.
Waltz to the beat of this black violin.
Let it possess you,
With it's blessed otherworldly serenade.

Sing,
Oh messengers of the netherworld's lust.
Sing to the sonata of this black violin.
Let it lead you,
Into a dream of dark pleasure.

Follow,
Oh followers of this black violin.
Follow my step, my breath, my voice.
Surrender yourself to my spell,
And let me show you how deep my love can run.

sakari09 10-30-2008 02:39 PM

Bearing the pain

Away from love
My heart is torn from my chest.
Love that shines true
Burns the soul that is left behind.
Time freezes like deep winter.
My breath comes quickly
And the darkness of unconsciousness
Looms overhead.
I long for peace of mind
But the darkness temps even the
Strongest of bodies.
We wish for love
Even if it burns to the touch.
Oh, how I long for love
That floats peacefully
Like the leaves in the fall
Or the snowflakes of winter—
A feather-light and gentle
Touch
Without pain.
For the moment
I’ll withstand it
I will withstand it,
Bear the burden
Of love.

tifa 10-30-2008 02:45 PM

the longer i wait for you to say you love
me the longer i live with out even knowing i lived,
the more i want you the more painful it gets to ignore you,
the though of you loving an other scares me more than my nightmares at nite...

my romeo...
my prince...
my savor....
my king

if i can not have you...i will kill every1 who get near to you until u can no longer ignore me anymore...because i am your master!
and you will become my

SLAVE

Ningyou 11-22-2008 12:45 AM

I'm glad that's there's so many writers on this website :) That makes me really happy.

The poem I'm going to post on here got published in a book, so I'm pretty proud of it. It might seem a little lame to some of you, but I wrote it like..4 years ago, so bear with me:

The boy knows not of what he feels
He doesn't know that this is real
He thinks it all to be a game
He tried to play with the other toys
But soon came to realize nothing
He did could change how he felt
Nothing at all

Because he had liked her game the best
He had fallen for a soulless witch
Someone with a heart as dark as his own
Someone with a touch colder than snow
The second her lips had met his own
He had been engulfed with real dark bliss
He had experienced true love's deadly kiss

He gave into her and when he did
She bled him dry

VampireGirl1314 12-06-2008 11:29 AM

So many lovely poems even though i can't read the last one or some of them.>^_^< i should put up the poems i wrote on my way back from florida to mexico.^_^

GreyGhost 12-08-2008 08:31 PM

Daydream
The sun bursts throught my window,
I hate it so.
I get up and close the shades
I walk back to my bed to lay.
But no sooner do I pick up my sheets
Does my alarm clock tell me that theres no more time to sleep.
So I eat breakfast,and head to school
Listening to teachers with a new set of rules.
I soon find myself emerised in my daydreams
I'm always dreaming it seems
I look out the window and see a fight going on between Mugen and Jin.
The teacher calls on me for the answer to the problem
I stare at the boared,not knowing how it solve them.
The teacher calls on someone eles
Thats when I see them
5 cyropterins
But then the bell rings,and class ends.
I head to science,I sit and look out the window.
I see humoculie forming an allince,with scar
but what is that from afar.
A flash,its alchemy,thats when I see.
Al and Ed,here to put the humoculie to bed
"ELIZABETH!!"my teacher said.
I raised my head,to listen or try to
But I still can't remimber what he said "shoot"
I walk to gym,but pass a history class on the way
I see Yuki,Kyo,and Tohru,hey.
Oh no a girl hugged one of the boys
a loud pop was heard,what a noise.
"hey Liz"my friend tapped my sholder
"were going to be late"she said
We were walking past the boulder.
Thats when I saw him,or them.
It was Sakura,Sasuke,and Naruto believe it!!
with all the other kids,is were they sit.
I blinked once and they were gone
I was dreaming all along.
I got to gym
thats when I saw him.
Ichigo fighting a Hollow
I thought they were real
Till they went through a wall though.
Time went by and school ended
Home was where I was headed.
I got to my house,and went to my room
I would see them soon.
Yup it was them
Inuyasha,and Koga fighting over Kagome again.
I giggled to myself,and walked to my bed
On my pillow I layed my head.
I drifted to sleep
tommrow I start another day of
Living in my dreams.

AnimeBaby112 12-09-2008 06:13 AM

I wrote this. Now, I feel the need to explain it because most people think it is depressed for the sake of being depressed. its not.
the story of it is:
i have not had the best life ever, i had moved away from my best friend forever. many things had happened since then.
the prince in the poem is my (now ex) boyfriend who was the only one that understood me.

now, if you still think this is dumb. well...


BROKEN.

My heart
Battle scarred
Cracked and torn.
My heart tears again
Bleeds afresh.
I throw my shattered heart into a dark corner
to be forgotten.
Darkness fills my heart untill it is black as night.
It is torn again and again and does not heal.
And the darkness remains
It grows deeper
My heart
A black stone
Hard
Cold
Jagged and torn.
Knowing it will never be whole again
it lies.
But then comes the prince.
My love.
He picks up my broken heart from the dark corner it lay.
Sews up the tears
Fills in the cracks
Draws new life into it
Untill my blackened heart is once more scarlet.


But now again my heart is torn.....

written by BLAIR.

Eiri 12-10-2008 01:45 AM

This is a series of poems that I recently wrote, I also have a few on writerscafe...

Oblivion

Pain and destruction is what she knew

She delved into the darkness

And left the light


As she fell further in

A light searched for her

As tears fell she turned away


He tried to reach her but couldn't

He called to her but darkness held

His light dimmed as she turned away


She went deeper into the darkness

And fell into oblivion

Falling and spinning into it


As she fell she saw his light

She then knew that he will come for her

And save her from oblivion



Lethe

Fallin and spinning in oblivion

She saw his familiar light

But didn't know him


He saw her in the mist of chaos

And felt his light dim further

As he threw himself into oblivion


She grew worried when his light dimmed

And fought against the darkness

To tell him to go back


He fought thru the darkness that held her

While oblivion threatened to take him

He saw her fighting thru the darkness and renewed his fight


She didnt want him to become lost in oblivion

He wanted to bring her back to the light

They met and held each other in a lovers embrace


His light grew strong as he held her

The darkness withdrew from them

But kept its hold on her, and lost her again


He called out to her, using all his strenght

He then thought he'd never see her again

But a small glimmer of light told him he would


Remember

She heard his voice calling to her, she saw his face

Fear, desperation, saddness, something familiar in his eyes

She remembered!


She knew who he was

And felt happy that he didnt give up

But darkness still wanted to keep her


She looked to him, but he was far

And so called out to him

As she did, her light grew brighter


He saw her light grow brighter and brighter

He went to help her

At last he could help her get out of oblivion


He drew closer to her, darkness moved away

She felt herself free, and joined him

Over joyed, he gave her a kiss


She woke to his sunlight kiss

And shook the darkness away

They made their way out


At last they reached light

Tears fell from her eyes

He brushed them away


Into the light they went

He next to her, and her next to him

Loving each other for eternity

PockyMePink 12-10-2008 02:06 AM

~el Delete~

redsteel 12-25-2008 07:29 AM

Stix and Stones
 
Stix and stones may brake my bones
But, chains and whips excite me.
so, tie me up, and beat me up
and tell me that you like me.:rheart:

Quote:

Originally Posted by VampireGirl1314 (Post 528400)
I like poems and i wanted to see if anyone else did to so here is a poem that i like.

Love Is Like A Sand Castle That Gets Washed Away.
One minute a sand castle is firm in the sand,
he next minute its crumbling into the water.
so build your up on the shore,
away from the waves of hate.
because once those waves hit you
your love is washed away.
don't choose a sand castle just because
its taller or looks better than another.
choose one that will hold you, support you forever.
don't let it wash away.

By: Cody Rutten
I hope you post some poems that you like.>^__^<



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