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redsteel 12-25-2008 07:40 AM

Is the end of the world 2012
 
FIRE AND ICE
By: Robert Frost
Some say the world will end in fire;
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To know that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ningyou (Post 631182)
I'm glad that's there's so many writers on this website :) That makes me really happy.

The poem I'm going to post on here got published in a book, so I'm pretty proud of it. It might seem a little lame to some of you, but I wrote it like..4 years ago, so bear with me:

The boy knows not of what he feels
He doesn't know that this is real
He thinks it all to be a game
He tried to play with the other toys
But soon came to realize nothing
He did could change how he felt
Nothing at all

Because he had liked her game the best
He had fallen for a soulless witch
Someone with a heart as dark as his own
Someone with a touch colder than snow
The second her lips had met his own
He had been engulfed with real dark bliss
He had experienced true love's deadly kiss

He gave into her and when he did
She bled him dry


loversandhaters 12-25-2008 11:27 AM

@ AnimeBaby112 : I really love your poem. The rhythm is great, though it's so sad.
@ redsteel : nice poem! :] I think it's kind of funny in the short way it's written. No extra drama, which makes it only more tragic.
@ Ningyou : I really love the end of your poem! That's important, because that's what decides most about how you feel of a poem. ;] You can be proud of it, great it got published!

This is one of the things I like to write, which I tend to do a lot.

Flawless

It’s in the moments like this,
When I don’t want to any more.
I should so much,
Could so much,
Promise so much…

But I want peace.
Silence.
Time stands still and nobody cares.
My promises break,
Time stands still.
Everyone goes on.

I want you to be with me.
To breath with you flawless,
And nothing more.
Time stands still.
Everyone goes on without us.
And the silence…

Loneliness swallows us.
When the people continue,
Without us.
They forget us,
And we are here together.
Without each other.

I look up to the sun,
Where are you?
I went through this too often,
I want to stay here,
With you nothing.
Time stands still.
Everyone goes on without us.
In the silence…

sakari09 12-29-2008 06:53 PM

Pain in love
Is something all souls with love in their hearts
Must endure.
Days become longer
When love is apart,
The hours tear at their heart strings;
Shredding them into pieces
But love must endure.
Stormy nights spent alone
Has all eyes brimming over with tears,
And the fear that you may not be among the living
In the morning.
But love must endure
Even if death claims the other half.

Inari 12-30-2008 02:51 AM

All of these poems are amazing!

Acidreptile 12-31-2008 01:31 AM

O amor é dor
Qualquer um que ache que o amor é indolor
Não sabe que o preto é a única cor

Amar é se escravizar
Perder totalmente a sua liberdade
Muitos se negam a aceitar
Mas esta é a verdade

Tolos buscam a felicidade
Sem saber que o universo não tem piedade
Fracos buscam um parceiro ou uma parceira
São mais cegos do que uma toupeira

É a verdade que ninguém quer aceitar
Mas ela está por aí e você não pode escapar
Amar é se desintegrar

sakari09 12-31-2008 03:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Acidreptile (Post 654855)
O amor é dor
Qualquer um que ache que o amor é indolor
Não sabe que o preto é a única cor

Amar é se escravizar
Perder totalmente a sua liberdade
Muitos se negam a aceitar
Mas esta é a verdade

Tolos buscam a felicidade
Sem saber que o universo não tem piedade
Fracos buscam um parceiro ou uma parceira
São mais cegos do que uma toupeira

É a verdade que ninguém quer aceitar
Mas ela está por aí e você não pode escapar
Amar é se desintegrar

(*It looks really awesome, but I can't read any of it. T.T*)

Inari 12-31-2008 12:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Acidreptile (Post 654855)
O amor é dor
Qualquer um que ache que o amor é indolor
Não sabe que o preto é a única cor

Amar é se escravizar
Perder totalmente a sua liberdade
Muitos se negam a aceitar
Mas esta é a verdade

Tolos buscam a felicidade
Sem saber que o universo não tem piedade
Fracos buscam um parceiro ou uma parceira
São mais cegos do que uma toupeira

É a verdade que ninguém quer aceitar
Mas ela está por aí e você não pode escapar
Amar é se desintegrar

poema surpreendente

Inari 12-31-2008 12:59 PM

Remember-Christina Rossetti
Remember me when I am gone away,
Gone far away into the silent land;
When you can no more hold me by the hand,
Nor I half turn to go yet turning stay.
Remember me when no more day by day.
You tell me of our future that you plann'd:
Only remember me; you understand
It will be late to counsel then or pray.
Yet if you should forget me for a while
And afterwards remember, do not grieve:
For if the darkness and corruption leave
A vestige of the thoughts that once I had,
Better by far you should forget and smile
Than that you should remember and be sad.

sakari09 12-31-2008 04:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Inari (Post 655148)
Remember-Christina Rossetti
Remember me when I am gone away,
Gone far away into the silent land;
When you can no more hold me by the hand,
Nor I half turn to go yet turning stay.
Remember me when no more day by day.
You tell me of our future that you plann'd:
Only remember me; you understand
It will be late to counsel then or pray.
Yet if you should forget me for a while
And afterwards remember, do not grieve:
For if the darkness and corruption leave
A vestige of the thoughts that once I had,
Better by far you should forget and smile
Than that you should remember and be sad.

Nice. I've always been a fan of her work. ^.^

VampireGirl1314 01-04-2009 10:09 PM

Finnally a new poem.XD
 
Something Special!!!

If you loved someone would you tell them?
if they loved you would you take care of them?
if they wanted to stay with you would they run away from home?
I would but only to see you!
I would tell you how much i loved you!
I would email you everyday just to make sure your okay!
But how can we trust this thing called love?
Do we just let life go on the way you dont want it to go?
I would never let a love like you get away not in my life time.
I would sleep in the cold just to be with you.
I would make sure you were happy.
If i was making you sad would you tell?
I think you would because you have a kind heart!
You are the most special thing ive found in life!
Thats why i will talk to you everyday and make sure you are okay!
But am i special enough for you to do the same for me???

By:VampireGirl1314


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