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VampireGirl1314 06-08-2009 03:35 PM

I woke up late last night
I didn't know why i was still tired
Yet i wasn't awake
was i dreaming still
was i really awake
was it really midnight
did i make yet another mistake
somebody help me
i don't know whats going on
i see and hear
i scream and fear
i don't know how to get out of here
images moving faster, and faster
getting bigger and bigger
moving closer, and closer
making me scream more and more
why cant i escape this monster
why cant i see her face
why do i see her in my dreams
why cant i get to my feet
why am i shaking
why am i screaming
why cant i stop from crying
was it just me
was i the monster i could see
was i the one in my dreams
it was my shadow
making me scared
making me unaware
it was just me
i am a monster to myself
and for no one else
an ugly beast
that doesnt deserve to breath.

Yuusuke 06-08-2009 03:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by VampireGirl1314 (Post 731118)
I woke up late last night
I didn't know why i was still tired
Yet i wasn't awake
was i dreaming still
was i really awake
was it really midnight
did i make yet another mistake
somebody help me
i don't know whats going on
i see and hear
i scream and fear
i don't know how to get out of here
images moving faster, and faster
getting bigger and bigger
moving closer, and closer
making me scream more and more
why cant i escape this monster
why cant i see her face
why do i see her in my dreams
why cant i get to my feet
why am i shaking
why am i screaming
why cant i stop from crying
was it just me
was i the monster i could see
was i the one in my dreams
it was my shadow
making me scared
making me unaware
it was just me
i am a monster to myself
and for no one else
an ugly beast
that doesnt deserve to breath.


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loved it

VampireGirl1314 06-08-2009 03:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Yuusuke (Post 731119)
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loved it

thanks.xD

i just woke up awhile ago and i was thinking about a dream i had.xD

its your turn to post something.xD

Yuusuke 06-08-2009 03:41 PM

i want write a haikuu how many slybs agn? i forgot x.x

VampireGirl1314 06-08-2009 03:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Yuusuke (Post 731121)
i want write a haikuu how many slybs agn? i forgot x.x

hehehe i wouldn't know.>.<

Yuusuke 06-08-2009 03:57 PM

my tye dye t-shirt
many many colors no
size is medium

thats it lol

VampireGirl1314 06-08-2009 04:09 PM

to many times
have i tried
to be with you
yet you do not like
being with me
so that's why i must leave
you don't like me here
so why do i live with you
when you don't love me
to give me the permission
that i must need
to hang with my friends
go to the parties
have fun and be a teen
just let me live this once
let me be
let me feel free
just for once this week?

iPhantom 06-08-2009 04:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by VampireGirl1314 (Post 731124)
to many times
have i tried
to be with you
yet you do not like
being with me
so that's why i must leave
you don't like me here
so why do i live with you
when you don't love me
to give me the permission
that i must need
to hang with my friends
go to the parties
have fun and be a teen
just let me live this once
let me be
let me feel free
just for once this week?

Can I be honest? That looks nothing like a poem. If that is a poem then I can transform this into a poem too, look:

Can I be honest?
That looks nothing
like a poem.

If that is a poem
then I can transform this
into a poem too,
look!


Voila!!!

Yuusuke 06-08-2009 04:20 PM

I used to hope
I used to dream
I used to think
Life was just a gentle stream.
But lately
The world has turned it's back on me.
An this dream has turned to hate.
and innate to the pain i feel inside
and for my strive



When I was in an emo band I wrote those lyrics.
The song was called (Fade Away)

iPhantom 06-08-2009 04:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Yuusuke (Post 731127)
I used to hope
I used to dream
I used to think
Life was just a gentle stream.
But lately
The world has turned it's back on me.
An this dream has turned to hate.
and innate to the pain i feel inside
and for my strive

Yea, I classify this one as a poem. Nice one.


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