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Smile A poem - 08-24-2009, 12:38 PM

hello every body,

I'm a new member in here and this is my first post ,hope you'll enjoy reading it
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well i WROTE THIS poem about the sea


here it is


ChaRming Wizard


So beautiful in vision


Chaining your heart with no reason


Bewitching your eyes each season



when you look at him you hear


Faint whispers yet so near


Inviting you to join with no fear


you may laugh coz it's not clear


Or you may cry and sob a tear



Because you feel like an elf


Comparing him to your self



When you hold his hand


You feel it warm like the sand


Of a mysterious witch land



When you look at his face


You run towards him in pace


As if you are in a race



When you sit by his side


You feel that you are in a horse ride


Running freely with a guide



He is a wizard with a magical stick


Who turns wool into silk


And water into sweet milk



He is a sorcerer with whom


you can ride a magical broom



And fly in the milky way


To other galaxies far away


Where you can live and stay


Forever Happy and Gay


26/6/2009

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08-24-2009, 03:23 PM

sweet i like how it rymes!! lol


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aregatou gozaimasu sis

so nice of you to be in my topic

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08-24-2009, 09:23 PM

I really like it! It sounds wonderfully

I want another ><
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Smile 08-24-2009, 09:28 PM

You sure can rhyme.

But the true test is: can you make a poem without rhyming?
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08-24-2009, 09:40 PM

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You sure can rhyme.

But the true test is: can you make a poem without rhyming?
O.O OHHHH that will be a challange. wat about a haiku???


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08-24-2009, 09:42 PM

That made me go hug Tommy. *tear* ( ,;



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08-25-2009, 01:33 AM

"Because you feel like an elf


Comparing him to your self"

Lol I like that part.Cute poem.I like poems that rhyme.^_^




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I really like it! It sounds wonderfully

I want another ><
Ok my dear sis you'll gind an other one soon

thanks a lot for being in my topic
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08-25-2009, 10:24 AM

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You sure can rhyme.

But the true test is: can you make a poem without rhyming?
Lol nice test ok I can write without rhyming and the next poem will one of them

see you in the challenge topic
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