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rafif
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08-24-2009, 12:38 PM
hello every body,
I'm a new member in here and this is my first post ,hope you'll enjoy reading it
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well i WROTE THIS poem about the
sea
here it is
ChaRming Wizard
So beautiful in vision
Chaining your heart with no reason
Bewitching your eyes each season
when you look at him you hear
Faint whispers yet so near
Inviting you to join with no fear
you may laugh coz it's not clear
Or you may cry and sob a tear
Because you feel like an elf
Comparing him to your self
When you hold his hand
You feel it warm like the sand
Of a mysterious witch land
When you look at his face
You run towards him in pace
As if you are in a race
When you sit by his side
You feel that you are in a horse ride
Running freely with a guide
He is a wizard with a magical stick
Who turns wool into silk
And water into sweet milk
He is a sorcerer with whom
you can ride a magical broom
And fly in the milky way
To other galaxies far away
Where you can live and stay
Forever Happy and Gay
26/6/2009
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08-24-2009, 03:23 PM
sweet i like how it rymes!! lol
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08-24-2009, 08:46 PM
aregatou gozaimasu sis
so nice of you to be in my topic
regards
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08-24-2009, 09:23 PM
I really like it! It sounds wonderfully
I want another ><
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08-24-2009, 09:28 PM
You sure can rhyme.
But the true test is: can you make a poem
without rhyming?
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08-24-2009, 09:40 PM
Quote:
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burkhartdesu
You sure can rhyme.
But the true test is: can you make a poem
without rhyming?
O.O OHHHH that will be a challange. wat about a haiku???
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08-24-2009, 09:42 PM
That made me go hug Tommy. *tear* ( ,;
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08-25-2009, 01:33 AM
"Because you feel like an elf
Comparing him to your self"
Lol I like that part.Cute poem.I like poems that rhyme.^_^
Um..........
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08-25-2009, 10:23 AM
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I really like it! It sounds wonderfully
I want another ><
Ok my dear sis you'll gind an other one soon
thanks a lot for being in my topic
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08-25-2009, 10:24 AM
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You sure can rhyme.
But the true test is: can you make a poem
without rhyming?
Lol nice test ok I can write without rhyming and the next poem will one of them
see you in the challenge topic
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