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You don't know me
I might beat you I'm better than you expect |
here's mine:
I used to collect shiny state quarters, until... the ice cream truck came. Humpty-Dumpty-san: If you go on a diet, you won't fall again. :D |
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wings are spread tears are falling darkness |
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Watching the Sky, Fade into Amber, A sigh escapes and so does my life. ...is that emo or is it just me? |
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hear the heart stopping the body gets cold darkness... is that what awaits us? |
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Exasperating, Unable To Withstand, Your Lurking In The Darkness... |
glass gets empty
you walk away rapacity? |
Seeing through closed eyes,
Hearing through covered ears, Unable to whisper your name... Backing down, Quivering with anticipation, Controlling emotion. |
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Very interesting... can be understood in at least 3 different ways, nice! Here's mine: dancing around the fire letting the life burn till dawn goes to sleep |
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Billowing like steam, Unable to breathe, The heat lighting up disaster |
feeding my fears
thinking about us running away |
Bright-lit skies,
Versus moon-lit nights, Caresses of another- held on tight. |
You tried to recognize the signs
To avoid another mistake It was useless |
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nice, you are definitely progressing! ^^ like meteor you passed me by and left my heart willing |
I always thought Haiku was strictly 5 syllables, then 7 syllables, and then 5 again. But after some quick searching, apparently non-Japanese Haiku is, as said in the first thread post, a maximum of no more than 3 lines and 18 syllables. Anyway, writing something quick here.
Mountain with fire A blue as clear as water Amidst winter's cool |
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Shouldn't be like this Working in a cube all day Bitter loneliness |
duck tape the heart
and run to find a hammer don't cry |
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