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Excessum 07-13-2007 05:33 PM
feeding my fears
thinking about us
running away

Fyer 07-13-2007 05:35 PM
Bright-lit skies,
Versus moon-lit nights,
Caresses of another- held on tight.

Acidreptile 07-15-2007 01:15 PM
You tried to recognize the signs
To avoid another mistake
It was useless

Excessum 07-17-2007 04:03 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Acidreptile (Post 179075)
You tried to recognize the signs
To avoid another mistake
It was useless

nice, you are definitely progressing! ^^

like meteor
you passed me by
and left my heart willing

Alastor 07-17-2007 05:58 PM
I always thought Haiku was strictly 5 syllables, then 7 syllables, and then 5 again. But after some quick searching, apparently non-Japanese Haiku is, as said in the first thread post, a maximum of no more than 3 lines and 18 syllables. Anyway, writing something quick here.

Mountain with fire
A blue as clear as water
Amidst winter's cool

Shaelyn 07-18-2007 02:04 AM
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Originally Posted by Alastor (Post 180859)
I always thought Haiku was strictly 5 syllables, then 7 syllables, and then 5 again.
yeah, that's what I was always told too. >.> It's what I'm used to now.

Shouldn't be like this
Working in a cube all day
Bitter loneliness

Excessum 07-21-2007 03:21 PM
duck tape the heart
and run to find a hammer
don't cry


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