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The first part to my Jrock fanfiction...
JRock Fan fiction
Kaoru looked over his shoulder. ”Who’s there?” ”No one, so shut up and let me stalk you!”Someone replied. ”Toshiya is that you?” Damn….Toshiya thought. ”Yeah it’s me. I just want to walk you home, KaoKaoKun! Can I walk you home?” Kaoru glanced at Toshiya. ”Yeah I guess.” Toshiya ran up to Kaoru.”You know Toshiya I really missed you tonight in the club.Why didn’t you come?”Kaoru looked eye to eye with Toshiya.”I don’t know I just didn’t feel like going.”Kaoru looked surprised.”what?Toshiya actually didn’t feel like meeting girls and guys?””Uh…yeah.”They reached Kaoru’s apartment.”well here we are.”They looked up at the building.”which one is yours?”Kaoru pointed at his apartment.”Wow…I can see your bathroom from here!”Toshiya smiled at Kaoru”Well Ja Ne.””Ja”Kaoru went his separate way.Aishiteru,KaoKao.Toshiya smiled. |
what do you guys think??I like it..........:D
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Well it sounds interesting! It's the first time a read a fic like this.
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hai hai!!!Cho kakoii desu ne?
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i enjoyed your fic,short but i liked it =^.^=
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thank you!!I will write more in class since i dont do work!!!
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Looks good so far.
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hai hai!!Tis wonderful...and one of these days i will get off my fat ass and write some more!!!
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Lolz!! sparks are not easy 2 come by, this i kno =^.-=v but i have faith in u, mreow!! *tackles/pounces* heh
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ok..............*pounces weakly*
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*huggles and tickles with kitty tail* mreow... = ; . ; =
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^^::smiles big smile:: ::snuggle wuggles::
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yayz a smile!!! *snuggles back and does happy dance*
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yes im smiling...........forcefully.
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*pokes w/ tail a few times* mreow...must i pinch ur cheeks again?
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That was cool and I cant wait to hear more!:D
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yeah i know!!One of these days!!!
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okay okay!!!
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i know!!!^^
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i know...i am pretty cocky aint i???
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i say you have to be pretty damn cocky to beat me...thats what i say!!!
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well....well...::flees::jk!!I came back...beat that!!!
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::doesnt come back::
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or do i???i mean you...
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Are you two going to require a referree? *kitty tail sways*
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what have i gotten myself into? Lolz
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but but but... *loks between Kira_2009 and GitarisutoKao* mmrreeooww...
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*Hugs Amber-Chan* OKay I'm ref! Amber-Chan wins! WEEEEE!!!!!!!!:ywave:
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whew... saved *sigh of relief and bows to NekoChan*
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