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Aleesunz (Offline)
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07-14-2007, 04:32 PM

Ohnice! <3 Weldunes : D A few minor spelling mistakes but they're going to be listening to them not reading them anyways : D

Just a suggestion - You could kind of repeat the
"As you knew it would.
You always knew it would."
Bit again just before the 2nd chorus? And turn it into a kind of eh semi-chorus/refrain thingymabob? (Can't remember the proper term for it) Or will that sound too cliched? (Pardon the pun XD)

I like it the way it is either way though : D


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