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08-20-2007, 03:56 AM

i've been working on my own story as well.

It's called Opposite to Gothik.

heres the quote log from it. (basically its the intro to the first episode i guess you could say.)

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In the year 2006, A terrible war broke out among the Hell Spawn and the Choir of Angels. The war escalated to the point where, it was becoming difficult for the Angels to keep this war a secret from the humans much longer. After two more years of suffering heavy casualties against the Hell Spawn, the angels had no choice, other than to let the humans find out for themselves what the universe is really like. The humans reacted most predictably. They were shocked, defensive, and eventually began to evolve to a stage where they were able to subdue the war.

The humans spent Three years developing a Large underground society under russia, for most of the remaining population of earth. Sealed from the inside, currently half the population of earth now lives beneath the surface. Scientists pressed by time and environment, set to work on developing a sky which simulated the night sky. It rains, the sky simulates sunlight and clouds.

Unfortunately for the rest of the population which was stuck on the surface world. The Hell Spawn And the Choir Of Angels, continued to fight it out in human forms. A family in the Choir Of Angels Fled from the fighting, A Father, a mother, and a Fourteen year old son; Hikaru, who had gleaming blue eyes and blue silky hair. Sending a message to the fathers brother on the side of the Hell Spawn, to flee to a Specific town, where they hoped, neither side would find them. Four years past, as the two families lived among the remaining humans.

They met and lived in a small community of refuges in Germany. The brothers names Were Kenoshi and Genki. A few months passed with no word from either army. Then on the Sixteenth of April. Kenoshi and Genki were sitting in a make-shift bar When three Angels came looking for them. A hideous battle ensues, both brothers die fighting.

Their families hearing the battle, flee, but the angels pursue them to the next town, Where the mother are forced to fight, leaving the Hell Spawn women's 6 year old son with Hikaru. The young boy had red spiky hair, and dark red eyes; His name was Kiyoshi.

The two boys fled as their mothers met the same fate as their fathers at the hands of the Angels. In the destruction of the town in which the angels had found the mothers and sons, the two young boys were buried under tons of buildings. Using what little heavenly magic he knew, Hikaru was able to extract himself and Kiyoshi from the rubble and trudge west ward away from the town towards the town known as Berlin, Germany.

Ten Years have passed since those days. Hikaru and Kiyoshi have faced many Enemies and triumphed over them.
and heres the theme song which isn't offical yet, (obviously) but i like the first minuet or so in it and it comes good with what i see in my head.

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