[Nattybumppo]

You really need to work on your accent in Japanese. You sound very... Australian. You also mispronounce some words and give some bad grammar in your examples:

For example, you say: 「わたしはしんだとおめているしんせきもいます」

But you should instead say: 「わたしがしんだとおもっているしんせきもいます」

I really admire your desire to help others with Japanese. I just think it might be good to get a little better at the language before trying to teach it to others.