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Originally Posted by Nagoyankee
你们好! Could someone please take a look at my writing below and make corrections? I'm only a beginning learner of Chinese and I know there are MANY mistakes. But please correct only the bigger mistakes because I don't want this to look like it's been written by someone else.
Thanks in advance! 请多关照! 
在想见的时候,能不见
不能听想被听的声音
不被触想被触的颊
近,距离远的人
太远的人
不能被在太阳下见的人
从大陆来了的美丽的人
恋爱是一刹那,并且恋爱是永远
在梦和现实的狭间仿徨
前往姓名也不知道的目的地
季节过去,并且市镇的颜色变化
时间中在停止了的心的旁边流动
在噪音和寂静中
在兴奋和灰心中
一个夜又深 |
I don't speak chinese lol