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06-01-2009, 02:04 PM

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Originally Posted by Yuusuke View Post
Good good! i liked it.
just a few corrections
Putting revisions in parenthesis is confusing for me (a native English speaker) to read. It appears that entire sentences are added instead of revisions to what is already present in the post itself.

I believe an arcaded street is a street that has one large, arched awning (or roof) stretched from one series of buildings to another over the street itself. Its purpose is to allow people to walk on the street somewhat protected from the sun and/or rain.


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