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Where it says a kid. Wouldnt it sound better if it said a child? I really like it so far
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Yes, I think it would thank you.
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Mazar - I've started reading your story and its quite good. Would you be ok if I were to give a critique on it and any tips that I may have collected over the years?
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It doesn't bother me it would be ok.