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10-09-2010, 02:19 AM

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Originally Posted by imeka View Post
So I think I'll go with
マクドナルドなどのファーストフード店で食事すること の増えたことは問題だと思う。
I leave out the chance part just to be more direct about it.
Thanks for the help
*sighs* We never say ことの増えたこと. Sounds too funny.

If you take a word out of a grammatically perfect sentence, you will almost always have to make other alterations (and do so correctly).
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