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03-14-2011, 09:44 AM

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Originally Posted by Koir View Post
Hope the revisions help the composition read better. As before, verbs were changed and sentences restructured for length and clarity. Also, "Bingo!" reminded me of this scene from a police comedy movie named "The Naked Gun".

Keep safe, Yuri!
Koir, thanks as always.

The video is funny. I thought he found something important when he said “Bingo!”, but it was a bingo card! Thank you!


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