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Originally Posted by delacroix01
It seems I'll need to rephrase my translation for the entire line a little. Does the following one sound okay?
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Having the chance to ride a car, Porfy frolics so much as if he has completely forgotten about Mina's birthday.
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That is the idea.
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By the way, was my last translation for お前の手先が器用なのはわかってるけどなあ in my previous post acceptable?
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I would say yes although you could have just said "I know you're good with your hands". These intentional changes are nothing unusual in translating a story. After all, you are the one who knows the flow of the story. I only have these almost isolated lines.