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07-27-2011, 12:36 AM

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Originally Posted by ratty View Post
looks spot on to me.
マジかよ~。

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Originally Posted by EijiTsuneo View Post
"上に下る、私は神さまの贈り物。"
You cannot 下る to 上. Just physically impossible.

「私」 and 「神さま」 sound too weak (and even a little funny) for the context. Those are what a "regular" person would use, not someone who is declaring he is God's gift. I would opt for 「われ」 and 「神」, respectively.
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And we Japanese-speakers never say "Konnichiwa minna!".
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