Epic fail!

[Smackjoe]

Hiya!

I would love somone to help/correct me with my signature.　As I used that with the minimum words I know. AND with an with the minimum words I know. AND with an online dicionary. I try to teach myself, but I used to learn.

From what I know, it says that Im not very good at Japanese, and my name is tristan.

I just put it there for some people that only read japanese.

Anyway, I plan to learn some new words while I am here, I hope you guys help me!

Buh-bye

[MMM]

Originally Posted by Smackjoe

Hiya!

I would love somone to help/correct me with my signature.　As I used that with the minimum words I know. AND with an with the minimum words I know. AND with an online dicionary. I try to teach myself, but I used to learn.

From what I know, it says that Im not very good at Japanese, and my name is tristan.

I just put it there for some people that only read japanese.

Anyway, I plan to learn some new words while I am here, I hope you guys help me!

Buh-bye

こたちわ　

ぼく　ごぜ　あらあ　ため　ほうじ ???
ぼく　みす　せりふ・ごほう ???

ありがと ありがとう

ぼく　の　なまえ　わ　Tristan　です。　Don't put in spaces. 僕の名前はトリスタンです。

ありがと　　　 ありがとう

Free the bees!

[KyleGoetz]

こたちわ　

ぼく　ごぜ　あらあ　ため　ほうじ
ぼく　みす　せりふ・ごほう

ありがと

ぼく　の　なまえ　わ　Tristan　です。

ありがと

As you can see from MMM's response, your thing basically doesn't have any meaning, or is at least pretty unintelligible.

Why don't you provide what you intended for it to mean?

Also note that the subject marker is written は (ha), not わ (wa).

Keep studying! Japanese is hard, and it takes perseverance.

[Nyororin]

Originally Posted by Smackjoe

こたちわ　

ぼく　ごぜ　あらあ　ため　ほうじ
ぼく　みす　せりふ・ごほう

ありがと

ぼく　の　なまえ　わ　Tristan　です。

ありがと

Let me try at deciphering it...

The first line is a complete mystery as is except for ぼく. ごぜ??? I can`t figure out what is meant with that one.
Could あらあ　ため be from 改める (using the meaning of correcting/changing)? With a dictionary search, I am thinking that ほうじ may be 邦字 - referring to Japanese characters.

The next line is pretty clear given some thought... But still very wrong.
僕 ミス 台詞・語法
My mistaken words/grammar... perhaps?