A Poets Collage of life...

[Sphinx01]

not a bad idea

[Sphinx01]

Thanks guys I'm glad u liked it...but here I have another poem for u that I hope u'll like as well entitled...

Even in Death

In the end it was my fault, ultimately my price to pay, but
instead u paid for me, now u rest in ur grave, all the work u
put into me, all te time u spent, worthless, like me now...
Why does the fallen live, why do the righteous pay the ultimate price,
Why does fate demand of the innocent their life, why do the givers have
everything ripped from their arms, why does their blood spill instead of ours, why are the sinners forced to live with this Unbearable shit, is this punishment, God's sick way of forcing me to repent...well it worked, but still u lay cold in heavens arms...while my road is another, one of damnation and eternal internal scars, but even in death nothing can devide our hearts

By:Sphinx

I was inspired to write this after wathing Samurai x Trust and Betrayl

[Hyakushi]

Originally Posted by Sphinx01

Thanks guys I'm glad u liked it...but here I have another poem for u that I hope u'll like as well entitled...

Even in Death

In the end it was my fault, ultimately my price to pay, but
instead u paid for me, now u rest in ur grave, all the work u
put into me, all te time u spent, worthless, like me now...
Why does the fallen live, why do the righteous pay the ultimate price,
Why does fate demand of the innocent their life, why do the givers have
everything ripped from their arms, why does their blood spill instead of ours, why are the sinners forced to live with this Unbearable shit, is this punishment, God's sick way of forcing me to repent...well it worked, but still u lay cold in heavens arms...while my road is another, one of damnation and eternal internal scars, but even in death nothing can devide our hearts

By:Sphinx

I was inspired to write this after wathing Samurai x Trust and Betrayl

Another cool poem but the higlighted parts kind of throw the reader off somewhat ruining the moment. I kind of had to reiterate the part where the innocent give there life ^_^ hahahahaha but then again maybe its just me. I still like it though

[Sphinx01]

long as u like it I'm cool man

[Sphinx01]

Well these two poems r it for today

[Natsume]

Wow that's rly cool I've actually seen that movie and it does actually capture the feeling.

[Sphinx01]

thanks that's what I was going for...I'm honord that u have enjoyed it.

[Natsume]

The Princess

The Princess sat in the Sun one day
Playing, Enjoying, and Basking away
And a man on the roof called out with a Smile
"Take this you Hag!"
And Dropped a bag on the Princess
Filled with Blood and Bile
The Bag Burst over her head!
Andd filled with dread
the princess said
"Oh I must look like I'm Dead"
She ran in a cave
So not to be seen
and in it she stayed
When it saw she was upset
the sun went away
It would not shine,
on such a horrible day.
It got cold and lonely
on that long night
And the Warrior said
"Where is the Princess?"
And the Warrior found her
Secluded in the Recess
And could not caox her out
no matter what he tried
So they called to the Poet
Who came up with a plan.
"We shall get her out yet, He said with ardur
They set up a mirror
and all clapped their hands
and sang
"look Princess, One more beautiful than thee!"
And she came out to see the beauty
and saw her reflection!
And the sun came out
happy to see
that there where none
more beautiful than she
She said to the poet
"This mirror is yours,
In it my soul shall thrive
and you and your line
Shall forever be alive"
and she said to her maids
"I need to go home
and I pray you have the soap
that makes that nice foam!"

My litle sister wrote that. She gave me permission to use it

[Sphinx01]

awesome..I c great talent!!!

[Sphinx01]

No Longer Man

In truth the stars mock me, in my heart fate is
the demonic reaper and I am his slave, In regret,
blood and misery my path has been paved,
Constellations sing of my torment/
My soul lies dormant/Evil now the
victor of my internal clash/ And farewell
to emotions my heart has beat it's last/

I won't blame her for this though, the fault was not hers
For how was she to know that all hope which rests in my eyes
is cursed/ How could she have known/ that I am damned and destined to
rest in hell as my home/ Until the end of eternity's sleep/ When I shall reign as king upon purgatory's forgotten throne/ Until the last in Armageddon has fallen and all r sent to their respective homes, I alone shall stand and watch on...As the creature of stone, no longer a man, never a king...I know now that all traces of what I once loved was merely a dream/ A collage of lies painted on the bosom of a once conscious being

BY: Sphinx
12-23-07


Wrote this one this morning after a convo I had last night/ or early htis morning rather wis my cousin about women and love...And bad break ups