Anyone want to show off song-writing or poetry? - Page 6

SailorBratt18 · (#51 (**permalink**))

Here is a poem my friend wrote when she just found out she had diabetes...

Hurting Me

You hurt me with your silence,
You hurt me with your side glance,
You hurt me in every way
And all I have to say,
Don't hurt me again!

I'm sorry that I make you sad,
Sorry that I get so mad,
Sorry that we feel so bad,
And that we lost the chance we had.
Don't hurt me again!

I'm just a girl,
Caught up in my own world,
And you ran away from that place,
You can't stand to look at my face.
You hurt me again.

Again we both shed tears,
Again we've lost more years,
Again Death stands in between us,
Again I've made a fuss,
Again we have lost.
We're hurt again.

You hurt me,
I hurt you.
We hurt together,
We hurt apart.
The hurting doesnt stop.
Make it stop.
Stop...
Stop...
Stop hurting me!
You're hurting me!

LittleFallenAngel · (#52 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by MitcheruOtaku

It's great. keep posting more!!

*Giggles*
I sure will=P

MitcheruOtaku · (#53 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by SailorBratt18

Here is a poem my friend wrote when she just found out she had diabetes...

Hurting Me

You hurt me with your silence,
You hurt me with your side glance,
You hurt me in every way
And all I have to say,
Don't hurt me again!

I'm sorry that I make you sad,
Sorry that I get so mad,
Sorry that we feel so bad,
And that we lost the chance we had.
Don't hurt me again!

I'm just a girl,
Caught up in my own world,
And you ran away from that place,
You can't stand to look at my face.
You hurt me again.

Again we both shed tears,
Again we've lost more years,
Again Death stands in between us,
Again I've made a fuss,
Again we have lost.
We're hurt again.

You hurt me,
I hurt you.
We hurt together,
We hurt apart.
The hurting doesnt stop.
Make it stop.
Stop...
Stop...
Stop hurting me!
You're hurting me!

Thats powerful- your friend has a hard road ahead.

Kajitsu · (#54 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by MitcheruOtaku

Yes your right, life has its ups and downs like a roller coaster! lol!
Remember the good times helps us when we are down. Inspiring, I'm just older, I guess lived life and I'm still learning its lessons!

Sorry to remove the apostrophes. Anyway, if you're having a hard day, you can say you're "following the emotional stock market." I say that sometimes.

MitcheruOtaku · (#55 (**permalink**))

Yeah, we neet to buy to stock that's steady and reliable!

Kajitsu · (#56 (**permalink**))

Sorry, I didn't want to share this, after all.

Kajitsu · (#57 (**permalink**))

Hey! We have almost more views than the forum rules! Read the rules, JF members!

Thank you

Gackt21 · (#58 (**permalink**))

Pine Knot, Kentuky

The buding flowers begin to open their flowers to the sky
My cats running along in the sun playfully teasing one another
Kittens arriving in the world
Everyone coming out of their homes to greet the warm air
The horse taking their morning runs
The cows and their kids having a game of tag
The birds singing a song while the trees dance in the wind
This is Pine Knot
The place where not much goes on
Except for the music of spring.

Brand new poem that I wrote about my home in the spring time. I hope you all like it. I might edited it if I feel I need to add more to it.

InuSan · (#59 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gackt21

Pine Knot, Kentuky

The buding flowers begin to open their flowers to the sky
My cats running along in the sun playfully teasing one another
Kittens arriving in the world
Everyone coming out of their homes to greet the warm air
The horse taking their morning runs
The cows and their kids having a game of tag
The birds singing a song while the trees dance in the wind
This is Pine Knot
The place where not much goes on
Except for the music of spring.

Brand new poem that I wrote about my home in the spring time. I hope you all like it. I might edited it if I feel I need to add more to it.

thats gooddd :]
id write about ohio
but it sucks here :P

SHELKE17 · (#60 (**permalink**))

hey not to be mean but you do no that someone could steal your songs or poetry and make it there own think about it....... some one on MTV or something singing something YOU wrote and making millions off it that would really suck becuase you wouldnt get any thing u no.