Check my English again, please!
 

Hi, everyone!

I need you to check my English, please.

日本語：さらに、もしよければ日本留学のお手伝いもし ますよ。
English: In addition we will help you studying abroad in Japan if you like.

Thank you,

English: In addition, we will help you to study abroad in Japan, if you would like.

Japanese: さらに、私たちは、もしあなたが日本で留学したいので あれば、手助けします。　

Thank you!
 

Ashida-san

Thank you very much!:)

In what context will this be used?

I would probably say:

Also, if you like we can help you study abroad in Japan.

lol Trying to correct the Japanese sentence written by a Japanese-speaker?

Where have you ever heard あなた used that way?

You are very welcome. :vsign:

Then maybe you should try to translate it better. :mtongue:

Why would a perfectly good sentence in Japanese written by a native speaker need to be touched? That's not what the OP was asking for.

Thank you
 

MMM san

Thank you very much for your reply.

I like the sentence you wrote but is it more casual than previous one?
I think both of them are grammtically correct.

I know it made you confused because I wrote just one sentence.
But if I wrote whole content it should be too long and I don't want to bother you...:(

Anyway I appreciate your help.:)

Thank you!

Because the OP asked for corrections. Therefore, corrections were made in English and Japanese.