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Man, here rhymes shine, I want mine to be like these, they like a sign in the dark times or in wars landmines, they blow and scars and hearts bleed and minds
are full of thoughts like yours you can see farther than your nose and yo udont pose and my mind blows when I read these thoughts. what you do my brother, is awesome, keep up the good work and all other things as well. |
Thanks bro ur words inspire me
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You rock man:vsign: |
Oh how marveolus to bask in the untainted splendor that is divine brotherhod!!!
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Rememberance I suppose I do this simply because I feel something/ And at the end of the day It's suppose to mean something/ Breath something into the soul of th world/ Leave craters as my footsteps everywhere that I went/ That's why I'm careful in what I say, so every word I meant/ No time to make mistakes and have to retrace only movement is ever forward- it's 2 short of a race/ So remember me for my words remember me for my soul/ Remember me for my warmth when my body grows cold/ Remember me for my mind, remember me for my heart/ Remember me as a man remember me 4 my art/ Tears disable sight so I seldom cry/ I cherish my masterpeice so I must be allowed to visualize/ I no longer scream in the dark because now I cherish silence/ I've laid my sword to sleep no longer a child of violence/ The road stretches beyond sight but I've come so far/ Impervious to failure because I fought so hard/ Remember me For the struggle/ Brush ur hand upon my scars/ So remember me for my words remeber me for my soul/ Remember me for my warmth when my body grows cold/ Remember me for mind, remember me for my heart/ Remember me as man remember me 4 my art Sphinx 03-26-08 :cool: |
You're a good writer
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Thanks and likewise to you!!!!*smiles*
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Fleeting like harmonies carressed by the sweetest of rhymes/ Unstable like Foundations in the addict's mind/ Crack is the ink with which write/ Cannabis is food for thought/ Inspired to inhale it all, as I passed the murder seen walking around the Block/ swift gaze but not swift enough to evade a shot from the cops/ 03-27-08 |
I like your style. I don't really have a style...
Keep up the good work:vsign: |
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Flipping through the heavens breezin through the stars/ Explorin that which is deeper than the depths of our hearts/ Searchin for the beyond like a mortals hidden scars/ Intricate emptiness/ Is all the eyes sees/ But the soul knows something holds heaven from me/ A barrier to blind and turn my my mind from what I seek/ I don't trust these stars so I treat 'em like the streets/ Both of 'em lie/ Though different parts of the sky/ One looks up one looks down/ Deppendin on where ur at that seen flips around/ Divided by the night/ I fear for my soul I'll lose/ So calmly I sit and wait to be erased by the dark side of the Moon/ Sphinx:cool: ..Today on 03-28-08 |
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