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Thunda 03-24-2008 09:47 PM

Man, here rhymes shine, I want mine to be like these, they like a sign in the dark times or in wars landmines, they blow and scars and hearts bleed and minds
are full of thoughts like yours you can see farther than your nose and yo udont pose and my mind blows when I read these thoughts.
what you do my brother, is awesome, keep up the good work and all other things as well.

Sphinx01 03-24-2008 10:08 PM

Thanks bro ur words inspire me

Thunda 03-24-2008 10:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sphinx01 (Post 435953)
Thanks bro ur words inspire me

and yours me, I think I will go and write some :cool: :cool:

You rock man:vsign:

Sphinx01 03-24-2008 10:21 PM

Oh how marveolus to bask in the untainted splendor that is divine brotherhod!!!

Sphinx01 03-26-2008 08:37 PM

Rememberance



I suppose I do this simply because I feel something/
And at the end of the day It's suppose to mean something/
Breath something into the soul of th world/ Leave craters as my footsteps
everywhere that I went/ That's why I'm careful in what I say, so every
word I meant/ No time to make mistakes and have to retrace only movement is ever forward- it's 2 short of a race/

So remember me for my words remember me for my soul/
Remember me for my warmth when my body grows cold/
Remember me for my mind, remember me for my heart/
Remember me as a man remember me 4 my art/

Tears disable sight so I seldom cry/ I cherish my masterpeice
so I must be allowed to visualize/ I no longer scream in the
dark because now I cherish silence/ I've laid my sword to sleep
no longer a child of violence/ The road stretches beyond sight
but I've come so far/ Impervious to failure because I fought so hard/
Remember me For the struggle/ Brush ur hand upon my scars/

So remember me for my words remeber me for my soul/
Remember me for my warmth when my body grows cold/
Remember me for mind, remember me for my heart/
Remember me as man remember me 4 my art

Sphinx
03-26-08

:cool:

SamuraiAlchemistNinja 03-27-2008 12:03 PM

You're a good writer

Sphinx01 03-27-2008 12:05 PM

Thanks and likewise to you!!!!*smiles*

Sphinx01 03-27-2008 06:57 PM

free
 
Freestyle

Fleeting like harmonies carressed by
the sweetest of rhymes/ Unstable like
Foundations in the addict's mind/ Crack is
the ink with which write/ Cannabis is food for thought/
Inspired to inhale it all, as I passed the murder seen walking around the Block/ swift gaze but not swift enough
to evade a shot from the cops/


03-27-08

SamuraiAlchemistNinja 03-27-2008 08:13 PM

I like your style. I don't really have a style...
Keep up the good work:vsign:

Sphinx01 03-28-2008 01:24 PM

Nothin
 
The DIvide

Flipping through the heavens breezin through the stars/
Explorin that which is deeper than the depths of our hearts/
Searchin for the beyond like a mortals hidden scars/ Intricate emptiness/
Is all the eyes sees/ But the soul knows something holds heaven from me/
A barrier to blind and turn my my mind from what I seek/ I don't trust these
stars so I treat 'em like the streets/ Both of 'em lie/ Though different parts of the sky/ One looks up one looks down/ Deppendin on where ur at that seen flips around/ Divided by the night/ I fear for my soul I'll lose/ So calmly I sit and wait to be erased by the dark side of the Moon/


Sphinx:cool: ..Today on 03-28-08


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