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Sphinx01 02-09-2008 12:29 AM

It's not cute new big sister ...It is a testiment of my love<(^_^<)

Natsume 02-11-2008 10:23 PM

Sorry I droped of the face of the earth guys. I'm back at least for a litte while.

Sphinx01 02-12-2008 03:09 AM

WOW...I've missed u so much Natsume...Time has been tearing me apart, I deeply missed u. I've thought about u every day, seriously everyday

Natsume 02-12-2008 03:38 AM

C'mon Sphinx I'm gonna blush if you don't stop :o

Thunda 02-12-2008 01:23 PM

Yo mate. I just discovered this awesome thread

Keep writin lyrics man these are awesome

Sphinx01 02-12-2008 01:35 PM

Oh tru thanks 4 dal luv man...I do it all for the luv, and for my sanity...

Marlene 02-12-2008 02:14 PM

Poetry? Hm, I'll contribute too. :p

This is an old poem, pretty darkish. My style has changed since then, but oh well. :D

The fairies' song

It’s been
several years
since the fairies sang
the lament of the rain
under a shivering sun
-dull, dirty yellow-
Several weeks
since he last saw the sparrow’s dance
on my heartbeat
-and a bloom,
any bloom except for those ghastly guardians of white marble-
Several moments
since the thick, black cold
since the eyelid closure
since the raw fear
the regret
since the smudge on my face-
and then rain
again.
But the fairies,
those sly, little creatures,
are tired of singing
anymore.

Natsume 02-12-2008 05:20 PM

Wow I've gotta say I'm impressed by all the creativity, and that was a great poem too Marlene. If you want you can check mine out in a previous post.

Marlene 02-12-2008 05:34 PM

Thanks! I read it; it's very, very original. :)

This is a more recent one:

Kim

She's not for you yet
pretty little thing
aged thirteen
still she plays with plastic dolls
on a worn sofa
the stench of old whiskey mixed with broccoli and dust
somewhere in the promised land
of lost Dreams
she dreams
of angels with crimson lipstick
and axes behind their back
Kim
aged fourteen now
she stomps on ants
her bedroom vomits posters of rock stars
but she won't forget
to go to church every Sunday like her mom and her aunt and
Dave who slaps his wife when his only white shirt
stinks of his own sweat
and old Jenna who doesn't understand
why her kind and sweet boy grew up to become a drug zombie
(since when has he had that hollow look in his eyes?)
but yes
she won't forget to go to church
and daydream of someone's wet lips
as she sings along with the chorus chastely-
she doesn't know it yet
but don't worry
we're getting her ready for you,
Future lover
Future husband,
soon
we will present you
with your very own
Wasted Woman copyright Millennium
to command.

Sphinx01 02-12-2008 06:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Natsume (Post 396652)
Wow I've gotta say I'm impressed by all the creativity, and that was a great poem too Marlene. If you want you can check mine out in a previous post.

Yes Marlene they are both beautiful,I'm impressed sincerely...And yes Natsume ur's is beautiful as well....Well everyone feel free to post their poems here I look forward to reading them:cool:


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