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VampireGirl1314 05-09-2009 08:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nendoroid (Post 713179)
My first poem, ever.

I am what the god forsaken cannot see
I am the specter, bigger than the sea

I am what you hate
I am what you love

I am something and all above

You are cute
I know its true
you would be so cute
If i was there with you
You would be mine
you would be the cutest thing
i would have one my mind.xD

Nendoroid 05-09-2009 08:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by VampireGirl1314 (Post 713181)
You are cute
I know its true
you would be so cute
If i was there with you
You would be mine
you would be the cutest thing
i would have one my mind.xD

HOW DO YOU MAKE POEMS?!

D:

VampireGirl1314 05-09-2009 09:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nendoroid (Post 713184)
HOW DO YOU MAKE POEMS?!

D:

easy just think.xD
i rime.xD
its always on my mind...>.<

You can read
You can see
you can sing
you can think

its all in the mind
its there all the time
just takes time
to make it rime

you will be able to do it
you just need to choose it

get your mind with the rime
don't think of time
just rime.xD

Dondake 05-10-2009 07:54 PM

Ha ha XD
That made me giggle...

The pale sunlight engulfs this old town
A false illusion that there's no shade
Yet as I find myself taking a walk around
I realize that it is sunlight that outweighs.


Something I wrote to keep positive~! ^^

Aota 05-10-2009 09:18 PM

It's not mine. It's actually a Jisei written by Basho. But...

"Tabi ni yande
yuma wa kareno o
kakemeguru"

VampireGirl1314 05-11-2009 07:53 AM

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I look in your eyes i feel just fine
you make me feel all right
i like your beautiful eyes
they are beautiful to see
beautiful for me
i could get lost in your eyes
i wish i could stay the night
just stare into your eyes
until its bright again outside

Gerlandox 05-11-2009 09:06 AM

eHEM this my second post i think here but 4 some son some butbut
has deleted it and i kow who:rolleyes: .BUT I WANT CRY TO U MAMA, U HEAR ME. ehh raise of status damages people.
anyway my poems :



Lost share email
10:38 AM

My shining star has fade`t away, I`m lost,
cant find my way,
to the angels I pray.
Would i find her anyway,
Would my pain go away?
Fuck it ...
I never belived in angels anyway...

Gerland
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Gerlandox 05-11-2009 09:08 AM

I saw you share email
10:36 AM

I saw you, I never believed in love.
I want to know you, but I don`t know if you want too.
I want to feel you, but I don`t know if that suits to you.
I want to breathe you, I hope you want that too.
I want to love you, but I don`t know if another man is in love with you.
Is that love i`m in to???
Such bittersweet pain, caused only from you.

Gerland
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Gerlandox 05-11-2009 09:10 AM

This is fo my butbut friend, sorry mate i was a jackass:D
....
and improvement seams so far away...
anyway...


Divinity share email
2:33 PM

Watching the light,
Sometimes it blinds me,
I searched for the "real" Divinity,
Found lies and hypocrisy,
No religion can give, what they`v promised me,
Just lies and hypocrisy,
The truth is, that this Divinity,
Its within you, within me,
Look within you, if you can see,
I can find, You can find,
The also called Divinity,
I found the light, and I can see.
My own perception of Divinity.
It`s inside of you,It`s inside of me.

Gerland
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VampireGirl1314 05-11-2009 09:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gerlandox (Post 714605)
I saw you share email
10:36 AM

I saw you, I never believed in love.
I want to know you, but I don`t know if you want too.
I want to feel you, but I don`t know if that suits to you.
I want to breathe you, I hope you want that too.
I want to love you, but I don`t know if another man is in love with you.
Is that love i`m in to???
Such bittersweet pain, caused only from you.

Gerland
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hahaha yeah we share emails.xD

[email protected]

thats a very sweet poem, i wish you best of luck with that girl.;)


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