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Laughs as he walks in to the both of you talking. "Whats up guys."
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Name: Atavius
Age: 18-23 Height: 6'1" Weight: 160 Occupation: Unknown Weapons: One handgun, katana and hightech watch with personal shield Further Details: After the plane crash during war he lost his memory and what is even more strange it looks like he dont have any micro-chips in his fingers. Which makes from him man without past and as he says even man without any future. He is sarcastic and stranger to everyone. Most of his time he spent outside the cities trying to recall his lost memories. He is good in healing and handy with most weapons. Apperance: Atavius have long white/grey hair which makes him look older, but even he is not completly sure how old he realy is. He wears black coat with black trousers. City: Unknown, right know he is somewhere at USA I was ready to eat my dinner which I hunted down only few minutes ago when heard sounds of fight comming from nearby. Firstly I thought that its just another fight of those mad beats which are all around this place, but then I heard some scream and terrifing laught. I decided to look whats going on there. After few minutes of run I found that place from all this noises were coming. Apparently there was some fight few moments ago but only thing that was there now was one big crater with one unconscious girl with pretty bad wounds. Something was telling me that I just should go let her die, cause I have enought my own problems right now and I dont want to get into something like last time. But then I suddenly realized that I am not alone there and those mad beats are already sneaking behind me. Damn, they must heard that noise too. Well I have no choice now I have just became part of this mess. After few minutes of fighting I managed to drive them away. Then I dropped my gun and started examining wounds of the girl. I noticed before that she is beauty but from the close she was even more beautifull. She was badly bleeding so I looked to my pocket for injection with medicine. When I looked back at her I realized that she was not unconscious any more and she is pointing with my own gun at my head. *damn why I just didnt stayed with my dinner* Pointing a gun on someone who is trying to help you is not very polite. Shut up!! I could swear that her I eyes were burning when she said that. Alright if you gonna shoot than do it, but then we both die right here right now or you can put that gun down and let me to help you. Choice is up to you. |
***ok, sry sweetsuicide, but, you have horrible spelling problems...lol...and i don't hate EVERYBODY...just...certain people who get in my way...lol...anyway...i want to say...WELCOME NEW-COMERS...and Guza, my JF valentine...*waves girlishly at screen and winks..."hi darling...* lol lol, j/k j/k...anyway, back to my awsome-self, actually, my character's awsome-self, this isn't me...ok, so, where did i leave off...oh yes, Egypt...***
I approached Cairo city looking for an inn, the image of the bloody sand still in my head. I figured I would stay here a while before I went to hunt down the Czar. ***eh, I don't feel like writing right now...I'll make up something good during school tomorrow and I'll get back to you...f*ucking writers block...*** |
laughs and just looks on. "this is very interesting" i walk over to a old chair and sit in it as i watch things unfold
"hmmm this should be interesting at the very least maybe even amusing." |
"Atavius, Suezette is mine buddy..." lets his anger flar as he slowly pulls his twin dragons out and cocks them with his teeth.
"You have two choices lay off or die and rot in the pits of hell that of which you came from you low level scum" "Situation C..until the target is totally silent....lifting the seal to allow use of ability..." |
"Jaustin! What are you doing here?!? I thought I killed you!" I was in shock. How did he not die? I looked over at Atavius and he looked back at me. was this really happening?? Jaustin was mad and he was getting mader by the second. I tried to calm him down but nothing was working.
"Jaustin, knock it off please! I'm begging you." I tried to get up but it was pointless, I was too weak and I was gettin weaker by the second. Atavius noticed that I was getting paler and walked over to me to try to help me. "Suezette, hold on ok? What ever you do, don't close you're eyes." Atavius warned me. He was more concered about me than he was of Jaustin. I slowly started to close my eyes when I saw Atavius yell over at Jaustin. "You killed her! How could you kill someone so beautiful like that?" After that, everything went black and I was numb... **Last thing I can probably write for a week cause I'm grounded. Keep it juicy and good boys! I like boys fighting over me! *winks at Razgir and asks him to be my JF Valentine* haha, now there's really something to fight over!** |
i soon returned to my compartment that suezette and i shared, wondering whst happened to her...nothing was broken, so no real forced entrance...hmm, there had to bw somethnig that i was missing...or suezette was missing
she carried around a tattered old bag when we met her, but she shouldn't have gone far because it's still here...with my new sence of security i sat down on an uncomforable bench waiting for my friend to come back sorry that really sucks :D |
***oh boy, I got something good! Everyone's gonna love it! (I hope, but who cares, you all ain't bothering me in my short jorney to kill the Czar of Russia anyway so, yeah...what do you all care! *dangles unfinished masterpeice in front of your faces* HA HA HA GHA *chokes* I got something amazing! BE ENVIOUS!) so I'm going to post it later when I have time to type it...Laters!***
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I awoke to Atavius standing over me. He was worried, I could tell. Well, actually it was kind of obvious for he was holding me there in his arms. Jaustin was looking on but he wasn't caring. All he cared about was me being his.
"Suezette, are you ok?" Atavius asked me, making sure I was awake. "Jaustin decided to be Mr. Jealous over here and decided to attack you when he saw me looking at you. According to him, you're his girlfriend." Atavius shot Jaustin a look of disgrace. "Atavius, I'm taken by no one. I'm my own person. I cannot feel. I cannot love. I can only fight. I'm a fighter and I've always been a fighter ever since I can remeber. I have to get going. I need to get on my way." I tried to stand up, but it was useless. I was still weak and didn't have my strenght back yet. Jaustin finally walked over. He was smiling form ear to ear, I guess he got his message across to me. I was now his, and there was no way out... *sry guys, didn't ahve a lot of time!** |
"Restrain Control Style Version 1 Ability Restraint Cancellation, Approval Recognized"
"Do you dare fight the devil himself now Atavius?" "if you even think about it you will not be walking away alive let alone be able to walk away." laughs "You see i am the real deal not some folklore legend that you can end with garlic or any of that bullshit." Grows multiple limbs with multiple eyes on them with a face of a dog thirsting for blood. Carries Suezette off into the dark and heals her body as i walk back out side to Atavius "if you really wish to die then so be it i will show you no mercy or pitty." "Even you are not worthy for any of the pits of hell." |
"Alright, Jaustin or what ever you are, I dont know what is between you and lady, but apparently she dont want to go with you. So I think its time for you to bow out." Jaustin dropped Suezette turned against me and I could see his lifeless eyes buring in anger. *good I draw his attention to me, just hold on baby, hold on*
"Did I asked you something? I gues no so why dont you just die?!" screamed Jaustin and start shooting at me with his twin dragons. I was quicker then him I raised my right hand against bullets and stoped them with shield in my watch. After he depleted his magazines in both of his guns he realized that I am still standing he raised towards sky and then with full speed charged against me. Now its my turn I quickly drawed my katana and was ready to strike, but in that second he stopped and with fear looked at my sword and in the next moment he disappeared. I didnt understand how could scare single blade such a beast, but then I remembered the words of that man who said me that I carry sword created by Masamune, which is known from legends as creater of holy swords. Heh, so the legends were maybe true. From my speculation got me back to real world loud sigh of Suezette. I quickly looked at her wounds again. Then I looked to her beatifull eyes. "This will little hurt, but it will help you. Trust me." With all her effort she managed to shake with her head as a sign of that she trust me. After that I get injection and stab her right to her heart. When I saw the pain in her eyes I instinctualy hugged her and whispered "Stay with me, please dont die now" |
Laughs evil laugh " you pathetic weakling "
"as if you didn't bother to read ahead and that i healed her already." "You honestly think i would hurt someone that is more interested in me then she is a pathetic pansy with a sword." "Do you really think just cause its a holy sword it would scare me. I have been cut and stabbed by baptized sword and the whole 9 yards and yet i am still here. You stupid fool. KNOW YOUR PLACE!" Picks him up and slams him through 4 concrete walls and then cuts his arm off wielding the sword. As he runs and bites into his flesh draining his blood slowly out of his body sending him through wall after wall rendering him more useless as he gets the wind knocked out of him repeatedly. "Your a pathetic weakling human with a sad excuse for a sword. Don't fuck with me agian or next time you will die. As for suezette she doesn't need any pansy fuck like you so stay away from her if you don't want your heart cut out and posted on a steak in a church." walks away carrying suezette in his arms her head leaning on his shoulder. Her arms wrapped around him as he walks away from the weakling that thought his holy blade and forcefield could stop the devil himself. Laughs an evil laugh and says " In the name of God, all impure souls of the living dead shall be banished into eternal damnation. AMEN! " |
I tried to get out of Jaustin's arms but it was useless. I was still very weak and I was slowly dying. Atavius was the only one who could see that. Atavius was right, I didn't want to be with Jaustin. He scared me so much. He was too powerful for me or anyone to take on. I knew he had to work for the King now. I started to squm around in Jaustin's arms but he held me too tightly to move. I suddely felt a sharp pain in my neck. I turned my head and saw Jaustin was biting down on it, sucking my blood. I tried to scream but it was pointless. He was too strong and powerful for me to try to fight back. I gave in and I couldn't stop thinking about Atavius. I hoped Atavius was ok. Jaustin had hurt him badly. I could still see the look in Atavius's eyes when he saw me laying there motionless after Jaustin's first attack. He was a kind and caring person. Unlike Jaustin who's only goal was to kill me. How can two people be so different?
**Sry I gotta run guys! SoftSilentDeath, can you please back dodwn for a while? This story isn't going the way we wanted it too. please and thanks!** |
It was late at night when Jaustin and I got back to Jaustin's house. I was asleep in his arms and still bledding from his bite marks. He layeeed me down in a bed and layed down next to me, just to make sure I was going to make it through the night. I woke up in the morning with Jaustin next to me with his arms rapped around me, like I was a pillow or something. I some how manged to get free (again) and I put a pillow in my place. I slowly walked out of the room and into the house. I saw armor form 1896 hanging on his walls. I kept on walking until I came to the front door. I opened it slowly but it still creaked a little bit. I waited 5 seconds to see if he had waken up but he didn't so I slipped out of the house and started to run away when my knee gave out. I was in so much pain but I knew I had to get away from this place. I kept on running until I was about 2 miles away. I looked back behind me just to make sure he wasn't following me, but I saw someone else following me. Atavius. He ran up and gave he a hug.
"I waited outside Jaustin's house all night wondering if you'd be ok and able to get out alive. What I injected you with," he told me as he still hugged me, "was a medicine that resotres you're strenght over night as you sleep." I couldn't believe it. That stab into my heart had actually saved my life? I was speachless. atavius was the complete and total opposite of Jaustin. Atavius was a kind of person that was rare now a days. He was normal. No clone of anyone. Just himself. "Atavius, I have no idea how to repay you for saving my life, twice now. There has to be something I can do to show you that you really saved my life." I saw he had a sparkle in his eyes. His face was glowing with joy. "Come with me. We'll leave this place and never come back. I'll protect you form any harm that would ever come in you're way." I knew he ment it. He face was serious but his voice was soft. He only cared about my saftey. I hugged him even tighter and just whispered, "Of course." **haha have fun with this Razgirz!** |
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wakes up slowly and finds that sueszette had left while i was sleeping. I slowly walk to the fridge and pull out a packet of medical blood drinking it.
"fuck it i don't give a shit anymore. If she can't look past her cold heart and see anything not my fault." Walks to the peice of armor and swords. Pulls a sword off the wall and starts flaring it around having fun playing with it. "This is such a great sword. I am surprized i found it next to such a pathetic soldier." Walks outside and looks into the moon "What a beautiful night." Walks slowly back inside and then takes a seat in a red thrown by the fire place. "Fuck she took one of my coats." Takes another coat out of the closet and puts it on as he puts his guns back in their holsters. "the next time i see that kid agian i'm not going to just hurt him badly. I will end his life and make him cease to exist anymore." Sits back into his chair and drinks his medical blood packet. As he looks out into the dark night he just sits there thinking and wondering what to do now. |
***SweetSuicide...That has to be the CUTEST icon I've ever seen! And I decided that I'm bring another character into the story...so, I'm gonna put in his character stats when I finally post what I've been writing...ok? He's really cool!...I like him...lol***
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**Thanks Musashi! lol I hoped you approve**
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***I do...very "anime"....I like alot!***
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****Blah boring....i am tired.....and bored........and i am brain dead..........i need a couple flamming nazis....or even a white russian would be nice now.......or a couple jager bombs.....or everclear.........BLAH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!****
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We started walking down the road side by side together.
"You are Suezzete right?" I asked. She stopped and looked at me. "Suzzete, yes. How you know that?" "Well that man who attacked you called you by that name. So, say me Suzzete, what a girl like you were doing outside city alone?" "I.." She didnt managed to end her sentence, because in that moment jumped in our way grey wolf. I was ready to draw my sword when, but Suzzete was quicker than me and killed him with her machete, by one swift strike. With surprise I looked at her and was ready to say something, but when saw her sadly looking at her hands covered with blood I couldnt say anything. I knew what that kind of sad look meant. I experienced it myself few times. She just remembered on someone who she killed. I walked to her tooked machete from her hands and wiped blood. She slowly looked to my eyes. Then she hugged me and whisspered "Dont worry, its ok." I looked at dead body of wolf and realized that she probably didnt eat for two days. "We will stay here tonight,at least we already have some dinner. OK?" She smiled at me. I guess that meant her agreement. *your turn Sweet, I hope you enjoy dinner* |
** one she isn't your sweety , two she is taken , and three you have no right calling her by any other name besides suezette or her real name if you even know it. Take my warning kid**
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We started a fire and sat down under a dead tree. I was still shaking from killing the wolf. I though back to when I was running out of town with my parents... it was night time. We had been running for at least 2 nights and only running at night so we didn't move during the day. As we came to the next town, we heard some grawling in the near by bushes. My dad told me and mom to stay back as he walked over to the bush. We watched him walk away. We saw him go over to the bush and look down behind it. We saw the wolf jump up and attck his face, ripping it off of the bone. I saw my mom run over to try to get the wolf off him. She was attacked by another wolf. I ran off hearing my mother scream at the top of her lungs for help but I was too afarid to run back. I screamed to her "I'm sorry. I'm sorry." but it was useless. The wolf had killed her already.... "I'm sorry. I'm sorry." I kept whispering it over and over again. Atavius looked at me with confusion on his face. "Suezette, are you ok?" He was holding my hand because it was shaking really badly. "No, I'm not ok. I'll never be ok. I ran away when my parent's were being killed by wolfs when I was younger. I watched them die! I could have saved them! But I was too scared and ran away and now I just killed one fom killing me! I'm a horriblbe person!!" I broke down crying. Atavius was just sitting there holding my hand letting me pour my heart out to him about my past. I knew that this was a bad idea but I dind't care. I needed to talk to someone and Atavius was willing to listen.. |
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Name: Yamato age: 17 height: 6'1" weapons: dagger Hes a small-town kid who never had a friend in the world just lived in solitude for his entire life but he's an amazing fighter and will always fight his way through any rough situation, even if he's the weaker. His sole companion in life was his dog that was almost always with him |
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there wasnt any hope for him. he had nothing in this world left except for his dog samurai, he was just wandering the earth looking for a purpose thinking he'd never find it. his name was Yamato. His dagger shined in the sunlight as he thought about taking his own life. As he did that Samurai grabbed the dagger out of his hand and whimpered as if to say "Dont give up". A few minute went by and he heard a crying in the distance and realized it was a girl and walked over to see what the fuss was all about, and he came across suezette crying her eyes out over her parents. "are you ok?" he asked curiously. "no, ill never be ok anymore" she said, "so just get away from me."
Suezette drew her machete hoping she'd scare Yamato away but to no avail, Yamato felt something he never felt before, at least not since his parents were alive. It was love. He felt compassion for this girl crying in front of him. With her machete still drawn he knew he wouldnt be able to get in any closer without harming her, or just disarming her. With one swift move he grabbed the machete out of her hand and threw it about 15 yeards behind him, way too far for Suezette to get at it without getting up. Yamato sat down with her and she told him the entire story and he said "its gonna be ok." and kissed her on the cheek. "im Yamato" he said. "Im Suezette." she said. |
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**w/e becki as if you didn't know its possible to edit things on this forum before someone reads it. being that you were grounded obviously you didn't read it before he changed it.**
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**alright SoftSilentDeath, if it will make you feel better there was firstly Sweety. Reason? I just simly misspeled her name. She did the same in some post, but I dont care. Characters can get tricky sometimes, I know that because I am writing each day in 3 different languages and learning fourth one. Are you happy now?**
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**Would you like me to feel pitty for you cause you know 3 different languages and learning a 4th? try speaking german , russian , japanese , arabic , and aramayic. And for all i care kid go ahead and play the victim cause i don't give two shits anymore. Have fun with the story and by the way Becki is taken and looks like her bf joined the fun too. Good luck. You'll need it.**
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thanks softsilent but i can take care of myself... lol, and yes i am beckis boyfriend and damn proud of it
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*** wow... ok... this is going great... softsilentdeath.... this is a story and NO ONE is suppost to know who anyone is.. saying everyone's name TOTALLY defeats the whol purpose of the story! ergh!! If anyone is really erious about this story still let me know and we can start a new thread without any fighting ok?***
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***love ya suzette!***
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hi i am khamwah from myanmar
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***no, he can't.....lol......but i should tech him!***
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