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VampireGirl1314 10-31-2009 12:50 AM

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Originally Posted by LordKiwii (Post 780587)
Your first? O.o I couldn't tell haha it's really good ^^

:D i had a bit of trouble trying to figure out what to draw,
and well when i finished the drawing i needed the background,
and i haven't been to the graveyard here in Mexico yet and i imagined it and i just well....drew.xD

PockyMePink 10-31-2009 04:17 AM

Wow, I haven't posted in this thread in years (or months...w/e)! lol
Weird.

Anywho, I attempted to draw my boyfriend (and failed miserably).
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e2...104_6095-1.jpg
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e2...104_6096-1.jpg
The second is just a quick sketch >>'

Oh, and I has reference image of him:
http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e2...7_5916-1-1.jpg

LordKiwii 10-31-2009 07:35 PM

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Originally Posted by VampireGirl1314 (Post 780607)
:D i had a bit of trouble trying to figure out what to draw,
and well when i finished the drawing i needed the background,
and i haven't been to the graveyard here in Mexico yet and i imagined it and i just well....drew.xD

Haha lol and normally you visit graveyards often? :D It looks cool though, if there was a spooky graveyard (including bats and optional vampires) I'd picnic there every night :p

MissMisa 11-02-2009 06:23 PM

Hello hello~

I'm drawing a girl, and something is wrong with her face. Her eyes look strange, and her mouth is off. I changed the eyes a few times, but I can't get it right.

Some advice would be great. Thanks :)


RKitagawa 11-02-2009 08:30 PM

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Originally Posted by MissMisa (Post 781044)
Hello hello~

I'm drawing a girl, and something is wrong with her face. Her eyes look strange, and her mouth is off. I changed the eyes a few times, but I can't get it right.

Some advice would be great. Thanks :)

yo! long time no see.

Here's an awesome lesson on eyes:

this guy really understands how to draw in 3D.

as for the mouth, look at the angle, it's off. remember that tip I gave you a long time ago about drawing the cross on the face? try it out, and you'll see.


here's some random site for reference: LINK

good luck! :ywave:

VampireGirl1314 11-02-2009 08:57 PM

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Originally Posted by LordKiwii (Post 780732)
Haha lol and normally you visit graveyards often? :D It looks cool though, if there was a spooky graveyard (including bats and optional vampires) I'd picnic there every night :p

i think we would both agree on that type of graveyard.xD

you gave me another idea for drawing too.^^

PockyMePink 11-02-2009 11:53 PM

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Originally Posted by MissMisa (Post 781044)
Hello hello~

I'm drawing a girl, and something is wrong with her face. Her eyes look strange, and her mouth is off. I changed the eyes a few times, but I can't get it right.

Some advice would be great. Thanks :)

The right eye is slanted weird compared to the one on the left. It'd probably look better if you turned it counterclockwise a bit.

Also, the nose is really big, which throws off. The longer line outlining it makes it look as if it should be passing infront of the left eye, which it doesn't. I suggest moving both lines outlining it closer to the center of the face. The make-up on the corners of the eyes also extent onto where the nose should be, so you might want to touch up on that.

The mouth should be slanted down more as well instead of up.

Just my advice, hope that helps.

Kyousuke 11-06-2009 08:59 PM

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Miss Misa, its probably me, but the eye on the left side looks kind of high up. Usually what helps is if you flip the image in the opposite direction, you can catch errors easy Also the eye on the left side is going over the nose, maybe make the nose smaller so and lift it up along with the mouth

MissMisa 11-11-2009 10:45 PM

Thanks very much for the advice everyone!

From it, this is what I have changed. I just restarted the whole face - I didn't want a cut and paste rubbed out crappy version, so I started again. This is something I really ever do, due to pure laziness, but I'm trying to cut bad habits.

Here is how it's going so far.


LordKiwii 11-17-2009 06:05 PM

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Originally Posted by VampireGirl1314 (Post 781054)
i think we would both agree on that type of graveyard.xD

you gave me another idea for drawing too.^^

Haha xD Ooh and you've gotta show it when it's finished! :D I drew something too a few days ago.. hmm as soon as my scanner remembers it's not a toaster I'll put it up here :)


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