Anyone want to show off song-writing or poetry? - Page 13

Kajitsu · (#121 (**permalink**))

I'm using that in something I'm writing.

Kajitsu · (#122 (**permalink**))

Keep this where everyone can see it! Who's with me?

MitcheruOtaku · (#123 (**permalink**))

I am!! let's keep this going!!

Kajitsu · (#124 (**permalink**))

+1 bump from 果実さん!

MitcheruOtaku · (#125 (**permalink**))

Standing on the Brink

Standing on the brink
waiting for something.
The world seems more lost
than I,
and it's waiting to explode
I see people all around
ready to jump out of
the skin they're in.
If one thing more goes wrong,
not thinkin it will take long.
For all we know
believe in
trust in,
happiness in possesions
no more.
All to be wiped away.
Standing on the brink.
Mitcheru~08

Kajitsu · (#126 (**permalink**))

This is literally 'hot off the press.'

In Your Memory

I scream your name
No, please don't leave
I need you around
Can you not see?
I yell your name
Come back, I say
Must this be how
It all ends here?
I call your name
Do you hear it now?
What have I done
To make it so?
I speak your name
Do you understand?
I fear you may
Never come back
I whisper your name
Why can't you stay?
I fall to the ground
You walk away.

MitcheruOtaku · (#127 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kajitsu

This is literally 'hot off the press.'

In Your Memory

I scream your name
No, please don't leave
I need you around
Can you not see?
I yell your name
Come back, I say
Must this be how
It all ends here?
I call your name
Do you hear it now?
What have I done
To make it so?
I speak your name
Do you understand?
I fear you may
Never come back
I whisper your name
Why can't you stay?
I fall to the ground
You walk away.

I can relate to that! Great words. Mine was too heavy.

Kajitsu · (#128 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by MitcheruOtaku

I can relate to that! Great words. Mine was too heavy.

Do you remember to whom you are saying that? I think it was fine.

Thank you

Kajitsu · (#129 (**permalink**))

I made the last four lines into a signature. How do you like it?

eleKtrickpenguin · (#130 (**permalink**))

i wrote one... its pretty bad, but maybe you guys will like it. its a kinda abstract collection of my thoughts after going to Sakura-Con 2008...

Crazy randomness.
Crossdress and cosplay.
Merch. for sale!
Glomped by fangirls...
Why am I broke? T-T
Para Para Deathnote?!
Phail at DDR...
Tired. Feet sore. Pass out on floor.
AWESOME.