Anyone want to show off song-writing or poetry?

[eleKtrickpenguin]

ok... i was just reading your guys' poems. they OWN. now i feel inadequate. T__T

=commence posting of poem that is actually slightly good=

i wrote this one after military recruiters came to my school. it's untitled... hope you like it!

Satan's army is recruiting,
come and join the fun.
Kill Maim Bomb Destroy,
all it costs is one.
A single simple soul,
then the deed is done.
You belong to me,
for eternity.

[Kajitsu]

Originally Posted by eleKtrickpenguin

i wrote one... its pretty bad, but maybe you guys will like it. its a kinda abstract collection of my thoughts after going to Sakura-Con 2008...

Crazy randomness.
Crossdress and cosplay.
Merch. for sale!
Glomped by fangirls...
Why am I broke? T-T
Para Para Deathnote?!
Phail at DDR...
Tired. Feet sore. Pass out on floor.
AWESOME.

It reminds me of my mall shopping poem. I'll see what I can remember.

Heavy doors and clothing stores
Craziness comes forth, it pours
Into a mind that isn't yours

Advertisements left and right
Pulling in with all their might
Not seeing reasons why you fight

That's all I can remember right now. I guess I'm not the typical girl :P

[MitcheruOtaku]

Originally Posted by Kajitsu

I made the last four lines into a signature. How do you like it?

Looks great! Very creative!

[eleKtrickpenguin]

kajitsu, yours is really good!!!

(which makes me depressed because i am poem-tarded. >___<)

[Kajitsu]

If you want, I can make another signature of it. I have Photoshop Elements now and it's mostly working.

Thank you

[MitcheruOtaku]

Photoshops great!! I use it at work, mostly on pictures though.

[Asakura]

Well I like poetry and I composed this after a friend had a falling out with their Fiance


Love can be sweet, and love can be kind love can be true if that's what you find. Loves have a tendency to be conductive, and the benefits can be quite seductive. But remember my friend above all, Love is destructive.


A litte macabe at the end but it gives you a grasp on the highs and lows.

[MitcheruOtaku]

Originally Posted by Asakura

Well I like poetry and I composed this after a friend had a falling out with their Fiance


Love can be sweet, and love can be kind love can be true if that's what you find. Loves have a tendency to be conductive, and the benefits can be quite seductive. But remember my friend above all, Love is destructive.


A litte macabe at the end but it gives you a grasp on the highs and lows.

It's true love can be!

[MitcheruOtaku]

The world spins
faster and faster.
Can't catch up.
Buy it now,
but you pay in the end.
You never gain,
keep falling behind.
Out of control,
it spins.
Faster and faster.
Mitcheru~

[KikiBunny23]

Something I came up with a few wekks ago

You think I'm strong?
Well guess what...you're wrong.
I'm just as weak as when I was small,
but that's kept inside.
I don't know how long.
Different phases,
same old me...
forgiving as ever,
can't you see?
The act ends here,
with this last line.
For I need you
But you don't need me