Please help me to read this English sentence:

[OzukakiBurasuki]

I don’t see why “it was confusing”. Does “it” mean your revision above?

The sentence / sentences you made for that section of your post was / were very confusing because you didn't have a concept on our culture and vocabulary we use for speaking about animal graves and our yards. We usually just call them frontyard, backyard, or lawn. We usually never sasy just "yard."

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[YuriTokoro]

最初の投稿者：girigiri

ゆりさん: はい、"they" = 「その猫」。 "would have"が所有格のように使用でございます。
それぞれ、graves: 共用、 a grave.
英語で"They would be buried in the yard"を言ったら非情な語です。いとしい動物には墓が与� ��られている。

I didn’t know saying "They would be buried in the yard" sounds hardhearted. Thank you.
How about “They (=people) have graves of the cats in a backyard”, not “The cats have graves in a backyard”?

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"The company has been giving me notice every year."のほうがいいです。

I see. Thank you.

「くおて」はなんですか？

I don’t know. What do you mean with it?

"The company has been giving me notice every year."
"The company has given me notice every year."
規則を作った人は誰にでもへ：完了時制はどのその陳述 の部分ですか？

Sorry, but I don’t understand this Japanese sentence.

Drink bars are rare in Adelaide, but they do exist. I'm not sure what they are called though.

Really!? I want to know the name of English. What would you call it?

[YuriTokoro]

最初の投稿者：OzukakiBurasuki

The sentence / sentences you made for that section of your post was / were very confusing because you didn't have a concept on our culture and vocabulary we use for speaking about animal graves and our yards. We usually just call them frontyard, backyard, or lawn. We usually never sasy just "yard."

D:

Definitely. I don’t have a concept on your culture. I wish I could know it.
Front yard, Backyard, and lawn. I see. Thank you!

[YuriTokoro]

Hi.
Could you correct my English?

"Yomise"

I went to yomise last night. The name of yomise literary means a shop opened at night. “Yo” is from “yoru” which means night. “Mise” usually means shop, but in this case it is “yatai” which is a small, mobile food stall.
At yatai, they sell yakisoba, takoyaki, ikayaki, baked apples, mizuame, beer, soft drinks and many other things. Wikipedia in English only mentions about yatai in Fukuoka-prefecture, but it exist everywhere in Japan.
However, when we say yomise, we mean a night festival with many yomise. It’s a signature summer event.
It was on a station road near my house last night. I wasn’t able to buy anything because there were too long lines of people in front of every yatai.

Thank you.
Yatai - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Yakisoba - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Takoyaki - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Ikayaki - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Mizuame - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

[Koir]

最初の投稿者：YuriTokoro

Hi.
Could you correct my English?

"Yomise"

I went to a yomise last night. The name of yomise literally means "a shop opened at night". “Yo” is the short form of “yoru” which means night. “Mise” usually means shop, but in this case it is “yatai”, or a small, mobile food stall.
A yatai usually sells yakisoba, takoyaki, ikayaki, baked apples, mizuame, beer, soft drinks and other food items. The English Wikipedia only mentions the yatai in Fukuoka-prefecture, but they exist everywhere in Japan.
However, when we say yomise, we mean a night festival that has many yomise. It’s a signature summer event.
It was on a station road near my house last night. I wasn’t able to buy anything because of the long lines in front of every yatai.

Thank you.
Yatai - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Yakisoba - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Takoyaki - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Ikayaki - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Mizuame - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Sounds like a very delicious place to be on a warm summer night, Yuri. Too bad about the lineups, though. Maybe next year you'll find yourself in front of a yatai ordered whatever you want

[Nagareboshi]

最初の投稿者：YuriTokoro

Hi.
Could you correct my English?

"Yomise"

I went to yomise last night. The name of yomise literary means a shop opened at night. “Yo” is from “yoru” which means night. “Mise” usually means shop, but in this case it is “yatai” which is a small, mobile food stall.
At yatai, they sell yakisoba, takoyaki, ikayaki, baked apples, mizuame, beer, soft drinks and many other things. Wikipedia in English only mentions about yatai in Fukuoka-prefecture, but it exist everywhere in Japan.
However, when we say yomise, we mean a night festival with many yomise. It’s a signature summer event.
It was on a station road near my house last night. I wasn’t able to buy anything because there were too long lines of people in front of every yatai.

Thank you.
Yatai - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Yakisoba - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Takoyaki - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Ikayaki - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Mizuame - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

"Exist" should be "exists". "I wasn’t able to buy anything because there were too long lines of people in front of every yatai" should be "I wasn't able to buy anything because the lines of people in front of every yatai were too long".

[YuriTokoro]

最初の投稿者：Koir

Sounds like a very delicious place to be on a warm summer night, Yuri. Too bad about the lineups, though. Maybe next year you'll find yourself in front of a yatai ordered whatever you want

Thanks, Koir.
You are always very kind.

[YuriTokoro]

最初の投稿者：Nagareboshi

"Exist" should be "exists". "I wasn’t able to buy anything because there were too long lines of people in front of every yatai" should be "I wasn't able to buy anything because the lines of people in front of every yatai were too long".

Hi, Nagareboshi.
Yes, you are right. It should be exists, and the lines were too long.
I should have written the sentences carefully.
Thank you.

[komitsuki]

最初の投稿者：YuriTokoro

Hi.
Could you correct my English?

"Yomise"

~ The name of yomise literary [sic] means

Let's see. For a simple defining of an thing or idea, using an adverb "literally" is too strong. This is only for expressing very bold points.

You can either say:

1. Yomise means...
* "to mean" has a sense of explaining entities#. So there is no need to say "name of *****" or "the word, *****" if it is only explaining something in a simple way.

or very very simply

2. Yomise is...
* "to be" has a sense of equating two entities. (yomise = nighttime store)

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# Something that exists; things or words

[OzukakiBurasuki]

最初の投稿者：YuriTokoro

Definitely. I don’t have a concept on your culture. I wish I could know it.
Front yard, Backyard, and lawn. I see. Thank you!

Good to be of some help to you.

Ask for more help if you wish.